Friday, October 20, 2017
Elevator Pitch No.2
Reflection of Feedback: The feedback I was given was very helpful. The biggest thing I realized I needed to add was a more detailed explanation of what exactly my product was and how it would work.
What I changed, based off feedback: In my original pitch, I didn't really make any good points on what exactly my product would do and how it would work. In this pitch, I tried to add in some minor details about the product, however without actually creating my product and showing it it is somewhat difficult. I thought of doing my pitch in a car to point out my ideas, but this would simply not be an elevator pitch to my knowledge. I also am wearing a different, not professional shirt, cause i couldn't find the only nice shirt I own.
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Owen,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was very good and clear. With this one you were really able to get your point across and you gave a great description of your product. You were very clear with how the product will work and function in the car. It was good that you could see the responses from others so then you could change your pitch to better your product.
Hey Owen,
ReplyDeleteI think that this elevator pitch definitely showed a lot of improvement from the last one. You clearly explained the need and then went on to accurately describe your product and what it does. I really enjoyed the ending hook of, “fasten your sleepbelts.” I think that this is very creative and catchy, which is something I’ve been looking for with my product. In my pitch I also changed the intro to include new markets which I thought was great that you did to with the drivers.
Thanks, Zach L.